tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9186539952058305290.post2225739136694585911..comments2023-12-07T07:39:12.810-06:00Comments on I'm an optimist. I'm a...: PFC: Challenge #3Farmer*swife a/k/a Glass_Half_Fullhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06369013637299261668noreply@blogger.comBlogger11125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9186539952058305290.post-53506753621657115862008-04-20T10:06:00.000-05:002008-04-20T10:06:00.000-05:00I really love the who idea of living loud (too lou...I really love the who idea of living loud (too loud at times) to drown out regret and pain. Very insightful.<BR/><BR/>Great work!Diannehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02946500110072411468noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9186539952058305290.post-8046417682961698902008-04-17T16:43:00.000-05:002008-04-17T16:43:00.000-05:00This was your best one yet! Though I really liked ...This was your best one yet! Though I really liked the fairy tale of last month too - but this one showed signs of maturity (I thought).<BR/><BR/>I really loved the whole feel and theme to the story. And, the ending was a perfect twist and surprise ending.<BR/><BR/>Absolutely wonderful work!R.E.H.https://www.blogger.com/profile/04959653462160442710noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9186539952058305290.post-19883245770377123982008-04-17T16:30:00.000-05:002008-04-17T16:30:00.000-05:00Thanks y'all for the read and the feedback. It is...Thanks y'all for the read and the feedback. It is so nice to ramble a story, feel proud that I did it yet...slacking if it will not live up to everyone else's (not competitively but quality).<BR/><BR/>It's so fun to run around and read everyone after I'm up. Then I feel all fuzzy at how we all manage to imaginate a story, some different, some similar in ways...<BR/><BR/>I've loved this project! Thanks for participating, thanks for reading, thanks <B>r.e.h.</B> for coming up with it...and thanks for commenting!Farmer*swife a/k/a Glass_Half_Fullhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06369013637299261668noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9186539952058305290.post-46825753501793042162008-04-17T14:09:00.000-05:002008-04-17T14:09:00.000-05:00Don't know what happened to the comment I left las...Don't know what happened to the comment I left last night (Agh... maybe senility is finally taking over), but since it's not here....<BR/><BR/>Great job. I like the way it ends. Reminds me a little of a speech in one of my favorite ever movies, Babette's Feast. Very nicely done - and cool surprise at the end.Ravenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04996538460071167819noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9186539952058305290.post-75434519381400666122008-04-16T20:26:00.000-05:002008-04-16T20:26:00.000-05:00I lkiie the first person approach to the story. Th...I lkiie the first person approach to the story. The way you went full circle with the "wrapping up in a box" was really cool too.Jeff Bhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10978944708950054312noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9186539952058305290.post-804305840559592652008-04-16T20:25:00.000-05:002008-04-16T20:25:00.000-05:00Yours was great! I loved it...ANGEL POWER!!!!!!I d...Yours was great! I loved it...<BR/><BR/>ANGEL POWER!!!!!!<BR/><BR/>I did my first one also!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9186539952058305290.post-53124560355275447472008-04-16T19:56:00.000-05:002008-04-16T19:56:00.000-05:00So different from your other stories! I really enj...So different from your other stories! I really enjoyed your pacing & style in this...it had a grit to it. The opening paragraph was fantastic, put me right in her head where I stayed. And what a nice surprise at the end :)Johttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09638509010212406012noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9186539952058305290.post-22481774657752715672008-04-16T17:08:00.000-05:002008-04-16T17:08:00.000-05:00That was a very touching story. You did a great j...That was a very touching story. You did a great job with it.captain corkyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10782650450297504567noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9186539952058305290.post-84278352559256993462008-04-16T16:30:00.000-05:002008-04-16T16:30:00.000-05:00The thought crossed my mind but then it faded away...The thought crossed my mind but then it faded away only to come WHAM right back at the end. Very sweet story. I like this one. Much nicer and happier than the shared brain story Jay and I each wrote.Newthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03350406826173534161noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9186539952058305290.post-86164924169961987192008-04-16T12:53:00.000-05:002008-04-16T12:53:00.000-05:00Wow, you really threw me off. I didn't see that co...Wow, you really threw me off. I didn't see that coming at all. It seemed so clear on my second read through. Great story. Loved it.Knighthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14108347590219803283noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9186539952058305290.post-23521459814468277982008-04-16T10:34:00.000-05:002008-04-16T10:34:00.000-05:00Great story! I didn't know where you were going w...Great story! I didn't know where you were going with it until the very end. I enjoyed that very much. <BR/><BR/>I had a tough time with the character too. Pretty tough to tell if it was a woman or a dude, but I went with woman too.Jayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17134850383532818765noreply@blogger.com